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Follow-Up Training
Author: J.
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(Added on Feb 11, 2008)
(This month 33699 readers) (Total 65044 readers) |
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Trainer requires females he has trained to return on a regular basis for follow-up training |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2012 |
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I liked "Follow-Up Training". A lot.
Usually I don't like male slave-trainers or their point of view, because a lot of the time they come across as macho idiots.
Here however, we are confronted with a man who loves his work, cherishes his craft, treats his subjects with the needed respect and care -all while pushing them furhter into lucid devotion and subjugation.
I too found at times that the focus went too much on what was- and how things were- being done instead of on the minds of trainer and trainee.
But that takes nothing away from my appreciation for the writing...
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Feb 20, 2008 |
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A rather well-told tale, over all. Certain literary no-nos were very evident, however, the style in which this tale was told made those no-nos work to a large degree. My main complaint was that it was almost too clinical and lacked the erotic qualities that might have pushed my review score up a point.
**Formatting: Not an issue in my review, as it never should be. The formatting, most likely, was a software issue with the site. Just the same, a copy and paste into wordpad solved the issue quite nicely. (8/10)
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masterdw
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Feb 18, 2008 |
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Excellent story but formatting problem made it very difficult to read (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
PuppyDoog
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Feb 15, 2008 |
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This was a very good story, with lots of interesting descriptions and interactions between the characters. As to the formatting, simply copy and paste it into a word document, and it's easy to read. (9/10)
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loadstar
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Feb 15, 2008 |
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Very good story. I enjoyed it very much. It did seem like the author may have gotten sidetracked in the plot, but still good over all. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
takarada
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Feb 13, 2008 |
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Very mild compared to night visits or Tammy's Training... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
delish
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Feb 13, 2008 |
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Here's why I haven't given it a lower rating: I've liked past stories by J., including Frisco. Here's why I haven't given it a higher rating: I found it to be unreadable, literally- something with the alignment is wrong and it cuts off part of the first word of every line. I look forward to reading it when it's been fixed, though! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Feb 14, 2008)
- Yes, there is something wrong with the formatting
- Replied by:
CoughDrop
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2008)
- Yep, there's a problem with alignment of the text. A real pity.
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| Reviewer:
sedmwif
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Feb 12, 2008 |
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A long time ago J. was one of the better writers to post his work here (and a few other sites).
Welcome back! Not as good as my fav, The Storyteller, but this is another excellent, well written story. (10/10)
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