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Author: Lisa Jones
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(Added on Feb 11, 2008)
(This month 67437 readers) (Total 132178 readers) |
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An ambitious secretary finds a way to blackmail her boss. Can she use this information to climb to the top? |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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drcatsup
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Mar 26, 2015 |
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A very well written, enjoyable story. I look forward to the sequel. (10/10)
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Martiniman
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Dec 10, 2011 |
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One of the best stories I've ever read! Lisa Jones is fabulous...read everything she writes...you'll be glad you did! (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 27, 2011 |
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Not my type of story but i had to read to the end. Yes the story is not really credible but somehow all the charaters are.
i really love Lisa Jones "one liners" in one story she refers to something smelling like a camels armpit, in this story Jan's mouth feels like a cat has slept in it, one just has to laugh at Lisa's clever use of imagary.
As i have already stated this is not my type of story but it is well written, with a good pace. Though not wishing to read more of these characters, more stories please. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Dryhill
(Edit) (Apr 27, 2011)
- Just over a year after reading this story i decided to re-read it, and now think my comments and rating it an eight were wrong. i have upped my rating to a ten as i feel this story is a lot better than i originally thought.
The whole situation is a tad improbable and the ending does seem a little rushed, but on the whole i really did enjoy the story more the second time round. Thank you Miss Lisa for a great read.
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Exocet
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Mar 26, 2010 |
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Good, but well off the usual standard. Just was't quite as credible - maybe it was some of the language which put me off, as it didn't quite fit this scenario. Couldn't quite make up my mind as to whether this was a romance or not, and the ending was a bit rushed. However, I doubt I could do anything like as good a job as an author, so I guess it's just that Lisa Jones has set the benchmark so high with her other stories that I've become a bit spoilt... (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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The plot may not always be tight and some situations are a tad over the top, but everything falls into place because of the expert handling of the subject by the author. Another well executed delivery!
JJ (9/10)
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roguerpj
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Oct 29, 2008 |
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Lisa,
Great story. It shows a lot of insight about not only what it takes to be submissive, but what domanence is.
I started reading this and could not stop till I was done.
Thanks
rogue (9/10)
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Jayden McZimmer
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Apr 26, 2008 |
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Lisa,
Great work on this story. Like all of your other ones it is enticing,erotic and ADDICTING! I can't wait for a new post. Thank you for sharing with us. (10/10)
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NinaH
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Apr 15, 2008 |
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Hey, I really love your story, it is written so fantastic, that I stay aroused while reading it. You found a very good way to let the reader have a realistic impression of the scenes and your settings are wonderful! I hope there still will be more! (10/10)
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dadisch
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Apr 8, 2008 |
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I am really enjoying this story. The characters are very beleivable & I love the way Wendy treats Jen, sometimes very kindly but also quite nastily. I am looking forward to more bondage & for Wendy to 'play' with Jen's new piercings. perhaps & possibly for Jen to 'made available' to various lesbian friends. The pissing incidents also lead me to believe that Jen will be subjected to various pissing humiliations with other females. Will she enjoy drinking piss, like Sally appears to? I cant wait for more chapters.
Well done Lisa. Part 6 is an excelent continuation, & it was great to see Jen loaned out to Tanya & for her have to pee in public. (10/10)
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Razor7826
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Mar 16, 2008 |
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Very good work, though I'm curious whether or not it can keep up the pace. There are already signs of the unending plod that befalls many erotica series. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2008)
- Thanks for your stars and your comments. I fully understand what you mean about the 'unending plod', it can be difficult to come up with a never ending list of new scenarios and a couple of my series died for exactly that reason. I'm hopeful that you'll find that is not the case here, well not for a few more chapters anyway.
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Euryleia
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Mar 16, 2008 |
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A very enjoyable blackmail story. As usual, the characters are well written. I can hardly wait to see where Lisa will take us in the next chapter. (9/10)
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bobcatsky
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Feb 24, 2008 |
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JUST KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING!!!!!!!!!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Feb 24, 2008)
- Thanks for the stars. More chapters coming very soon.
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Feb 19, 2008 |
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Very good story held my interest. Plot was great and the twist was excellent. (8/10)
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mda073
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Feb 12, 2008 |
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Good story, held my interest and has me waiting for the next chapter. (8/10)
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