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Education of Charlotte Simmons
Author: Harry Berg
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(Added on Feb 27, 2008)
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Charlotte Simmons has brains, athletic skill, and a libido driven desire to learn about sex. What she can’t learn from her dysfunctional family, she hopes to experience from others. A sex oriented coming of age story. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wild77er
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Mar 9, 2012 |
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Great story good action but it does not seem like it is the end (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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May 19, 2010 |
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Alright..
First of all, it's a really good story so far, but A) it's unfinished and B)the story code is inaccurate...
The story lack the "F/m" tag.
And the "extreme", "nc", "mc" and "torture" tags are fairly weakly justified if at all justified by the current content of the story, ending with chapter 22.
The realism of the characters is not the highest I've seen although non of the characters have entirely impossible personalities.
You also leave several story threads hanging loose..
The story would be better if you add one or more chapters tying up some of them I think.
Other then that, a great story, highly enjoyable.
Oh, another thing..
I love stories with a lot of talking and stuff, keep up the good work ^^ (9/10)
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ramses
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Apr 18, 2008 |
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You definitely have writing skills. However, most of the interesting writing codes remain unfulfilled (like humiliation, torture, nc, extreme). In any case, it is a very promising start indeed. I will review my rating as it develops. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Apr 14, 2008 |
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I'm really enjoying this story. I'll give it a '9' if there gets to be more sex than talking (though this talking IS moving plot; it's not gratuitous). The only thing I've noticed that you might want to watch out for (or not) is that a woman with 9% body fat will never get her period, and probably won't develop more than mounds ('A' cup if she's lucky). Since I like women like that, and have written about them on occaission, it doesn't bother me, but it occured to me that you might not have been aware. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 29, 2008 |
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very enjoyable ot read and i like the layout, different scenrio's in each chapter (8/10)
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jheller69
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Mar 8, 2008 |
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Parts 1 & 2 are both well thought out and presented. The characters so far are still in the "get to know them" stage so I look forward to future post. Well woth the time to read. J (7/10)
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lowandsweet
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Mar 3, 2008 |
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great story, hope to hear more about charlie and toni use this hot slut to become a big whore, for cock & pussy. (10/10)
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