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Year One
Author: Balir
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(Added on Apr 9, 2008)
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A husband and wife learn that they have been submitting to the same Master, and are offered a new life in his service. This story will run to ~10 chapters in the end. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jasper24
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Oct 27, 2008 |
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Excellent story. The focus on the couple, both the man and the woman equally, is fantastic. The speed and the perspective of the story are just right. The Master and his instruments are creative and described perfectly, not to detailed nor to vague. I hope the story continues in the same manner. Great work, thank you. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nalle123
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Apr 15, 2008 |
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Truly loved this one.
Please let us have the next period, can not wait to see what you have in store for this slave couple :)
Grate work! (9/10)
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