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My Secret
Author: mothbrad
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(Added on Apr 21, 2008)
(This month 11968 readers) (Total 25471 readers) |
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Sometimes the burden of keeping a secret can be unbearable. And sometimes love is not what you might expect. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Eric Boss
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Apr 28, 2008 |
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The restrained, almost gentle style of writing serves to highlight the delicious sadism of the narrator. Speaking as one who wouldn't know restraint in style if he fell over it, I admired it and found it arousing ... I wanted more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2008)
- Boss, it's always a joy when one of my favourite writers enjoys something I write, so thanks for stopping by. Hope I can keep on hitting the spot.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 27, 2008 |
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A nice little story with just the right touch of creepiness. It starts slow and just gets weirder. A few problems with verb tense and minor editing kept it from a higher score. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Mothbrad
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2008)
- Thank you for the taking the time to leave that great review, Mad Lews. Tenses are one of my slight weaknesses, and something I'm trying to get totally right, so I appreciate the advice.
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