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Making Wages in Mongolia
Author: Helena Aranatovya
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(Added on Apr 21, 2008)
(This month 24410 readers) (Total 43174 readers) |
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A French police officer who had won a lottery ticket travels to Mongolia to participate in some illegal motor bike racing for both lots of money and the thrill. One evening a local rival of her's proposes a wager. She wins, he will pay her €2 Million and will never see him again. He wins, she will become his slave for the rest of her life |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Apr 27, 2008 |
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The sex acts are too short, no emotion or feeling whatsoever, the immediate willingness of Joan is unbelievable. And if she is already a millionaire, why did she agree to the bet? (4/10)
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kemosabe
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Apr 26, 2008 |
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First part or not, this story lacks any real plot. The language is obviously the result of someone who is not familiar with English. The willingness of the woman is unbelievable at best; ridiculous story. (3/10)
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FSchmertz
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Apr 24, 2008 |
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I hate to have to rate this, since it's clearly missing the first part, it just seems to repeat the second part twice. I'll edit the review once it's possible to read the story. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
helena_aranatovya
(Edit) (Apr 26, 2008)
- Hi FSchmertz
I made a mistake by sending Part 2 twice.Accident and first time I am sending any sort of story for anything EVER
Next time I am sending everything by submissions@bdsmlibrary.com
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