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Ebony In England
Author: SAE
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(Added on May 14, 2008)
(This month 9337 readers) (Total 13004 readers) |
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Online sub comes to England to meet her "master" and gets a nasty surprise |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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May 21, 2008 |
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Good — basically agree with Mad Lews. Especially impressive for how complete it was given its brevity. It does raise questions, though (most of which I can't ask here without giving away the twist). For me it was these questions rather than the typos and tense changes that lowered it from an '8' to a '7'. (7/10)
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Mad Lews
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May 16, 2008 |
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Very good concept, great little twist at the end. The execution suffers somewhat by the typos and tense changes. A quick read through and edit before publishing would help immensely. (7/10)
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