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Roffeless
Author: Danielle
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(Added on May 16, 2008)
(This month 134985 readers) (Total 177716 readers) |
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A smart girl thinks she has outwitted a couple of sleazballs, but the game she plays leads her down into depravity and ruin. |
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Average (?):  (10/10) |
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Bellatheslut
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May 16, 2012 |
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Wonderful story. I loved the set-up and the twists and turns at the end. Loved all the different adventures she had too. Excellent stuff. (10/10)
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yishabeia
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Jan 7, 2010 |
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Such a great story. I shared it with all my friends. Everyone loved it.
Please write more. We cannot wait for your next story. (10/10)
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non-writer
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Oct 20, 2008 |
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This is one of the best stories on the site. I love how Barb feels she's in control up to the end. (10/10)
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sedmwif
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Jul 15, 2008 |
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One of the all time best! Danielle could post this on a paid site (but thank you for not). This writer is clearly becoming one of the better writers to post. Forget the sequel, let us review another story.... PLEASE! (I know you have begun posting another story, but your posts are too far apart IMHO. (10/10)
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TheVariableX
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Jun 18, 2008 |
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I loved it.
If you like people struggling with their dark secret urges, and losing, this is one of the best stories you will find. (10/10)
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Razor7826
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Jun 11, 2008 |
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This is the only story on the Library for which I've eagerly awaited new chapters. That about sums it up. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DanielleK
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2008)
- Thank you very, very much. This story is finished. But there is a sequel already up: "Barb's Fall From Grace."
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strict_master
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Jun 3, 2008 |
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This story is superb. The buildup to her trickery and the final twist was terrifically done. Very nice writing and story telling.
However, you must continue, or add a sequel about barb's continued descent, and her relationship with her masters. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DanielleK
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2008)
- The story is nicely self contained. But there will be a sequel... or two.. kisses.
Danielle
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Mr.Shine
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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The best story I've read this year and already one of my all time favorites. I love the idea and the main character is extremely well crafted. Danielle managed to maintain her high quality writing until the very end. A masterpiece. (10/10)
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CrazyMe
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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Great stuff, really. Exciting and with an unpredicted twist at the end. ;) (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 1, 2008 |
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Best story I've read in a while. Danielle has a knack for good characterizations, compelling storyline, portrayal of a state of mind and excellent conversations between individuals. In other words: another Author (notice the capital ''A'') to join the small league of top-notch writers of prose of the erotic variety.
Make sure to add Danielle's story-page to your bookmarks.
Thank you very much for yet another superb tale, Danielle...
JJ (10/10)
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Lincilla
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May 31, 2008 |
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I love this its a great story thank so much for taking the time to write it! (9/10)
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H Dean
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May 28, 2008 |
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This is quite well put together. There are a few gaffes in the technical arena - mostly in the first chapter - and a few inconsistencies in the writing. My main complaint is that it is a bit too informal in the writing style. Also, the use of the word "anus" seems quite out of character when considering the free use of words like "cunt".
**Now that I have gotten my complaints out of the way, I should add to the positive reviews found here. This is a very recommendable story that should be easy to enjoy by any reader with a properly prurient mind.
**Chapter 4 just came into my sights in a rather pleasant way. A good continuation with the promise for more debauchery. Quite well done. Something I failed to mention in my earlier review was how fresh this story is compared to so many out there. This tale is headed for my bookshelf. Good stuff. (9/10)
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Sam Blythe
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May 27, 2008 |
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I am anxious to read more and see where you take this. It would be interesting to see if they ever redevelop the interest in taking pictures, which could then create a blackmail angle. Also, how many more times could they get together as a three-some without at least once slipping her the drug without her being aware of it.
Keep up the good work. I cant wait for the next part. (10/10)
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janmayen
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May 25, 2008 |
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Great story line.
I konow exactly what the author is saying about her heroine wanting to do certain things but not wanting to acknowledge that she is doing them of her own volition.
I hope Danielle will work on chapter 4 soon. (10/10)
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msdoitnasty
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May 24, 2008 |
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Great story...can't wait until part 4...bring the dogs in.... (9/10)
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puppyjen
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May 23, 2008 |
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Great story. Love the idea of the 'heroine' losing to her own desires and not to the 'villains'. (10/10)
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Lizgirl
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May 23, 2008 |
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Very interesting basis for a story and very well-written.
I'd love to see Colin in a Dom-role without the use of drugs. Could he handle that? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DanielleK
(Edit) (May 23, 2008)
- Thank you Lizgirl. Actually, I'm thinking of writing a sequel story that explores exactly that.
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stevie335
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May 23, 2008 |
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Very nice, looking forward to read more. (10/10)
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Benfan
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May 21, 2008 |
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This is fantastic stuff. I'm sure Danielle has an ending planned and can't wait to see where she's going with this. (10/10)
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denuseri
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May 21, 2008 |
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gods this story is like perfect,, hope to see more of it soon (10/10)
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AlphaBeta
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May 19, 2008 |
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(For future reference -- I'm writing this review after reading the first part of this story.)
This is as close to a perfect beginning to a story as any I've seen on this site. It's got everything. We're talking fantastic writing, smooth pacing, great characterization, and above all -- LOTS of heat. This story was fun to read, darkly engaging, and erotic as hell.
This is a must-read for fans of the "descent into dark desires" subgenre, with an extremely believable (and unique!) setup and masterfully expressed emotions and motivations. The way the heroine's approach to her situation switched back and forth between haughty, playful detachment and aroused, humiliated submission gave me shivers . . . and a certain other bodily reaction.
There's not much "whips & chains" BDSM in this first installment, so if that's absolutely all you're interested in, you may want to steer clear. For anyone else, I can't recommend this highly enough. If this story is never continued, it will still stand as one of my all-time favorites on this site; and if it continues down the path the author has set up, I'll be able to strike the "one of" from that.
My one regret? That Danielle apparently only writes one story every three years. This was fantastic, and I want more! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DanielleK
(Edit) (May 23, 2008)
- I'll definitely try and write more. Promise.
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