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Maid Elizabeth
Author: Jake
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(Added on May 27, 2008)
(This month 70322 readers) (Total 128016 readers) |
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A young women begins her journey into servitude and sexual slavery |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lucky#13
(Edit) |
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Nov 17, 2008 |
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I LOVE this story it was what made me decide to join the BDSM website. I would greatly appreciate it if you wrote more. I also have enjoyed your other stories you have written. You are a very talented writer and i thank you for your contributions. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jake63
(Edit) (Nov 23, 2008)
- Thanks Lucky #13 and hope you enjoy the site.
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| Reviewer:
SubmissiveKitten
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Nov 7, 2008 |
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Oh Sir! , i absolutely adored this story i sat down and read it from start to finish , the part with maria and how Kat had treated her acctualy made me tear up , you have a amazing imagination , and a very hot one to *giggles and blushes * i love the way hes such a strong dom but still careing to , the story really apealed to me and i cant wait for the next addition.
*kisses and licks *
Kitten xxx (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Oct 27, 2008 |
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this story is superb! I am hoping Maria escaped being taken anally the first time she lived with him and he gets her this time! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
AndreaDawne
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Oct 25, 2008 |
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Wow Jake! I really love this story. I love how the Master handled things in the story. The loss of his Maria really had me tearing. Kat was a viscious one, how humiliated she made Elizabeth be by clean the toilet bowl! I had lost my appitite for lunch at that scene!! Lol The reunion had brought me more tears. When Maria came back I felt happy and sad the same time because I didn't want Elizabeth to be gone. But it all worked out at the end. I Love it! All in all I had some major rush through the story and I like to thank you for that Sir!! *giggle* (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mist
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Aug 1, 2008 |
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10/10! awesome story! it would be even better, if Elizabeth found her dominant side! (10/10)
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suissepervert
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Jul 15, 2008 |
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I like this story very much.
Exellent writing, all the more for a first time.
Thanks for sharing. (10/10)
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Venom
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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Give us back Kat! I love the bathroom scene, when she forced Elizabeth to prove the toilet's cleanness. Not the rather disgusting act itself, but the power behind this passage is one of the reasons for your next 10/10... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jake63
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2008)
- Thanks for the review. Yes, Kat will return,but the table will be turned.
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| Reviewer:
jazmine232
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Jun 21, 2008 |
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I loved the story. How will Elizabeth's training be continued and will Kat seek revenge? Can the introduction of diapers, so that Elizabeth will learn that going to the toilet is a privilege, be apart of her training? (10/10)
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masterdw
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May 31, 2008 |
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I loved the story and would have given it a 10 except you left her panties for the waitress to find. How was it available for her to wipe herself after pissing? Outside of that a wonderful effort. Upon further review, she did retrieve the panties. It is therefore worthy of a 10. Keep it up. (10/10)
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