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My Final Resting Place
Author: Badspyro
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(Added on Jun 1, 2008)
(This month 23947 readers) (Total 45080 readers) |
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A story of finality and the moments, care and love leading up to the compleation of a life long dream... |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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Like consume me said, this is fetish/submission/bondage to its extreme. Contrary to consume me though, I feel that the story as it is has just the right length. Make it longer and you take out the tension and the dreamlike melancholy that somehow emanates from this endearing, yet chilling tale. Well done. JJ (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Jaeger
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Jun 5, 2008 |
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A truly lovely story. Nice ideas and an almost believable setup too. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
consume_me
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Jun 3, 2008 |
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A wonderfully intense story that takes a kink to its darkest, extremest and yet most exciting conclusion. The story gets straight to the point and doesn't leave the reader waiting; though my only thought is that the story has such intensity that it could be extended much more and still keep the reader gagging with excitement. (8/10)
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