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Birthday
Author: Lockedup737
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(Added on Jun 1, 2008)
(This month 59115 readers) (Total 78743 readers) |
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All Robin and Jamie wanted to do was to celebrate Jamie's birthday. They went to a bar to pick up guys and got more than they wanted when THEY got picked up. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
hoppalong
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Jun 7, 2008 |
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Good story.. please write more like it :-)
A bit short . (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
munjon40
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Jun 5, 2008 |
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loved this is an old fantasie of mine.
hope you add to it. need to get a little more graffic more detailf (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Koli22
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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bad story (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Benfan
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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A little short and sparse on description. But I like the scenario and the writer seems to have good insight in expressing his characters. Hoping for more from this writer in the future. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Eric Boss
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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Very nice, enjoyable, so nasty, really liked it. Too short! Write more, please. (9/10)
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