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Pony Girl Bondage
Author: Unknown
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(Added on Dec 28, 2001)
(This month 246073 readers) (Total 318227 readers) |
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This is a story about pony training of several girls, involving submission, discipline, training and pony trading. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Sep 13, 2012 |
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Love pony girl stories, but this one is incredibly
tedious and fraught with one after the other
identical depictions of the same scenarios. Just
change the name of the victim and rewrite the same
description of scenes. I bet I could find thirty or more identical phrases such as, "heavy luscious
breasts," in this story. Could not finish it, not to say that it does not have potential. Need
to be more imaginative with your vocabulary.
(5/10)
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| Reviewer:
dennisthmn
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Oct 2, 2006 |
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an excellent pony story, I wish there was more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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Ponygirl stories are still the best (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mistresscandy
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Jul 25, 2003 |
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this is a great story! I love ponygirl themes such as this, this story truly has it all, but the authoer clearly didnt proof read it. There are too many run on Sentances, and.. and.. and.. there are way too many ands, the story just seems to be rushed because of all these grammer mistakes. Unkown, your a great writer with great ideas. keep writing and please proof read, proof reading will get you the extra 2 stars! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
morganhawke
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Feb 5, 2002 |
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There is no denying that the author is more than familiar with the techniques of Pony Training. His technical expertise is without question.
However, the author is not a writer. The material has a lot of promise but I had a hard time getting into the characters or sympathizing with them. In some cases, I couldn't suspend disbelief long enough to really enjoy it. It is really obvious that the author is male. As I female, I would have made totally different choices.
Rather than writing form the female's / victim's point of view he should write from the Trainer's point of view. This will actually fix a lot of simple mistakes and tighten the plot.
As I said, there's a lot of promise but a good editor could really make this collection glow.
(5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mickydoughty
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Dec 31, 2001 |
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> Just had to write and say what a fantastic story - Pony girl bondage by unknown is. It has that great combination of subjects - Pony girls,
bondage, harems, forced breeding, forced lactation. It reminds me of the Harem series by Allan Aldiss and Ian Smith's books on ponygirls.
It contains the stories of several girls decline into the slave mindset. Though this story is longer than both these authors produce, it has all the right elements to keep it flowing, and the reader engrossed to the end. Like all these stories there is a lack of long lingering sex scenes. There are brief descriptions which would keep you interested if that's all you want from such fiction. Though if your a fan of the humiliation and enslavement of females, then this is the one to read. I must say that this is on a par with the best I have read in this subject, for a very long time.
> Please Unknown who wrote this come forward and keep writing, and lets see the continuing saga of these girls in slavery.
>
(10/10)
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