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Barb's fall from grace.
Author: Danielle
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(Added on Jun 9, 2008)
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This is a direct sequel to Roffeless, so you should read that first. But it is a stand alone story. Barb, our heroine, rebels against her submissive nature... Will she succeed in recovering her self-respect and self-worth? |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Apr 28, 2011 |
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I don't know how I missed this little gem! Having read Roffeless some years ago I am quite amazed that you managed to maintain such excellence into a sequel.
Really, this was erotic, exciting and well written. The dings you received for formatting should be dinged for bothering to complain. Reviews should be based on the writing and story quality and not on double spacing or any silliness like that.
I realize this was a 2008 tale but I do hope you open a few more chapters for your fans.
H Dean (10/10)
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Elkor
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Sep 2, 2008 |
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This seems like a very natural ending to the story, or at least it would for most any other author on the site. I'm honestly at a loss for how writing more could do anything but dilute the powerful ending you established with this chapter.
Let's hope you can disprove my expectations... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 18, 2008 |
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Basically agree with Jimmy jump. I was a little surprised to read that Barb's adventures will continue, since this seemed like a very good way to wrap it up. One of the best psychological stories I've read on this site. And you really seem to have a great feel for the minor characters in the story (taxi driver, Ted's roommates). They react in very realistic ways. {Knocked the score down because I wasn't satisfied with the sex. There's just no pleasing me!) For future stories, please use a larger point font. And it would feel less choppy (chksng's complaint) if you only left one blank line between paragraphs. Are you using three now? (8/10)
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kemosabe
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Jun 18, 2008 |
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The style reminds me much of V.P. Viddler's works that hold a special place in the annals of BDSM library. Enjoyed it very much and look forward to more (9/10)
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TheVariableX
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Jun 18, 2008 |
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Definatly a 10 if you promise to do lots of nasty, horrible, sexy things to Barb. I assume she will love it. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 18, 2008 |
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While thestory is told well and moves right along, the short, choppy telling is a little hard to keep up with. (7/10)
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Longarm
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Jun 13, 2008 |
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Luv it and Roffeless. Can't wait for more! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 12, 2008 |
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A very nice addendum to ''Roofeless'', tho I have the feeling upon conclusion, that there's a possibility for more...
But maybe save that for a different story...
Thanks a lot for a fine effort.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DanielleK
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2008)
- This is sort of an intermission. You know, a quiet, gentle time to relax and unwind a little. The next story in Barb's journey will be unspeakably vile, degenerate and drippingly sexy.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2008)
- Ok. Thanks for the heads up. But I fear I'm gonna lose sleep now I know you have more niceties in store for Barb...
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