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The Shop Assistant
Author: Flinkar
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(Added on Jul 2, 2008)
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A shop assistant finds that a customer is a bit more than she bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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very nicely done (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
derteeslut
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Jul 8, 2008 |
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Great beginning... could (and should!) develop this theme further. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ukMasterC
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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Well written. Could have done with being longer and a bit slower - too much action too quickly. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dragonfly996
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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I really liked it and I hope more customers...females...come in to try or have her try dresses and the like... Thanks. (9/10)
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