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The Fuckmeat Gene
Author: creative_cunt
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(Added on Jul 2, 2008)
(This month 23131 readers) (Total 38043 readers) |
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Taking place far into the future, a gene has been discovered in women that identifies them as fuckmeat. This the story of Sarah's introduction to her new world. (This is a stand alone story, but if people like it I have ideas for squeals) |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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Grammar is acceptable but there are some spelling mistakes, the latter however did not distract from the story. So unless you have edited the story i do not know what grinner666 was complaining about.
The only thing i am not totally happy about is the way the parents and best friends change so drastically. My youngest has had nothing to do with me for about 8 years, yet i will still do all in my power to help her. However this story is listed as sci fi and is clearly set way off in the future, so anything is possible.
Thanks for a good read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
HurtMeNatalie
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Jun 23, 2010 |
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I love this one. If you fo sequels, would love to see more pain & torture. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 4, 2009 |
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Had a little chuckle seeing your nom-de-plume, hehe... quite...errm... creative, I must say.
I found the story to be a small delight which does your name proud.
A tad crude and fast-paced, but it works well in this set-up.
Would love to see more content added.
Oh, and don't mind grinner666. He's a complete obnoxious tit, judging by his 'reviews'.
JJ (9/10)
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phonixasz
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Aug 3, 2008 |
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Would like to read more about this (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
YngMaster8
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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I think it was a great start. I usually like the chapters to be a little longer but sometimes the breaks in the story don't make that possible. I look forward to reading the next in the series. (8/10)
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Mr. Pete
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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Nice idea, and I thought the story read fairly well. Did you fix the spelling and grammar mistakes? I had no idea what loser666 was talking about. (8/10)
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useuhard
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Jul 7, 2008 |
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I truly enjoyed the concept and the subject. A very hot and sexy read that I am sure will improve as the writer becomes more experienced. A recommendation might be to find someone as an editor to help with grammar and other items to help improve the writings. (8/10)
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pollycoventry
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Jul 7, 2008 |
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Great start but I hope you will continue her degredation in delicious detail (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
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Jul 7, 2008 |
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Learn to spell, learn BASIC GRAMMAR, and learn something about how a story is put together. I could barely stand to finish this, it was so horrible. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
creative_cunt
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2008)
- I thank you for your constructive criticisms. I will try to improve the grammar and spelling in my next literary endeavor. As for the storytelling, I guess that can only improve with practice so perhaps my next story won’t be such a chore to read. :)
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hnspicey
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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Nicely done, great intro into your characters and setting. I really hope that you do a sequel or 3! I can't wait to read more of Sarah's encounters and of the society she's in. Great start! You had me wanting more and getting me absolutely soaked! ;) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
creative_cunt
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2008)
- Awww thank you so much. I think at most there will be two sequels, but thanks again for such sweet words. Hopefully the next one will be even better; and not only will you be soaked but doing other stuff too ::giggle::
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