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Sister Amelia
Author: A.Broadsword
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(Added on Jul 11, 2008)
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Martha Allen becoms a Nun giving up all her posessions her name her dignity everything for the order and finds true fulfillment. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
rebelwolfen
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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exellent work.the first chapter dragged a bit,but the final chapter more than made up for it.would luv to hear more of her future adventures. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jul 16, 2008 |
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Not a bad plot, but too many typos. Things like "labial lips": 'labia' MEANS lips, so you are referring to "lips lips"? Some confusion in character, as in the beginning when Martha pulls out the whip to whip herself. Needs an editor to help it be more readable. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Jul 14, 2008 |
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I love the Nun genre, this was a plot i had not yet found, the idea of them turning the youngest out in order to pay the bills was awesome! Hope to read about the next virgin to pay the bills soon! (9/10)
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Captive1
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Jul 13, 2008 |
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Well done. Builds slowly and gets better and better. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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