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White Girl
Author: TheVariableX
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(Added on Aug 7, 2008)
(This month 98172 readers) (Total 140454 readers) |
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When a father is kicked out of the military, and his wife is arrested for prostitution, he takes his fourteen year old daughter deep into the outback to find a new job. It isn't long before he takes sexual advantage of his prodigy daughter. The story focuses on her struggle to find happiness in a strange and unfamiliar land, while living with her drunken, violent, incestous, pedophile father. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Willit
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Jul 31, 2012 |
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I don't know how I never stumbled on this until now. Maybe because it doesn't have any real bondage or torture, and that's what I used to read exclusively on this site.
Don't let that keep you from this story! The daddy/daughter dominance dynamic is very evocative. It has a perfect balance between real narrative and sexual content (most stories seem to be either pure porn fests or annoying novels).
An absolute must read. If you're not rock hard by the end of the first chapter, you would have to be dead inside. (10/10)
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nassim
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Aug 19, 2011 |
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Easily one of the best stories on this site. Really hoping you pick up on this story again some day. (10/10)
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joshjg
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Jan 6, 2009 |
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Fantastic, wish there was more! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
axesis
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Nov 12, 2008 |
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i hope you finish this story i have been unable to stop reading until i there was no more to read. please add more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rosiane
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Sep 26, 2008 |
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The first chapters were really hot!!
Hope there is a lot more to come.
Thanks
Rosi (9/10)
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mike uk reader
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Aug 22, 2008 |
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This story is just great and well put together.
Let's hope there is much more to come from this author. My top rating for the first part.
ADDED---22nd August 2008--- Just to give my appreciation here for the continuation of more parts to your story. Well done. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
TheVariableX
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2008)
- Thank you very much for the review.
I was trying to write some non erotic fiction when my muse suddenly disappeared. I started writing this and liked how it was going. There is more written, I think almost 20,000 words more already. I will continue to upload parts.
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| Reviewer:
irishman112145
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Aug 9, 2008 |
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I cannoy wait until you write more. Thanks (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nassim
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2011)
- I'll second that.
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