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Ravaged
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Aug 21, 2008)
(This month 96195 readers) (Total 137826 readers) |
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Attractive woman living alone in the country becomes the helpless victim of a sadistic stalker. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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excellent (9/10)
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Reviewer:
sayuna
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Sep 19, 2008 |
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liked the build up in the begining, and of course the eventual damsel in distress... do be merciful on her :o) (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Aug 29, 2008 |
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Nice concept, but illegible. Please read almost anything written in English in the last 200 years and try to follow suit. You are losing grades because you have to bold all your type and can't format in basic English. PLEASE get an editor if you're not sure how: you are wasting a fine talent! (7/10)
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Reviewer:
DesertDom
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Aug 26, 2008 |
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I am a fan of this author. Previous stories were entertaining had me coming back for more updates. I do have to echo the earlier feedback, the formating and bolding leaves a lot to be desired. I am not copying and pasting to a computer file and re-formating, otherwise it is almost unreadable. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
wttozer
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Aug 24, 2008 |
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The formating drives me nuts. The story is well very written. I look forward to seeing where it goes. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Captive1
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Aug 22, 2008 |
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Great story! The formatting is all that has kept you from a 10. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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