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Last Girls On Planet Earth
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Sep 20, 2008)
(This month 12196 readers) (Total 28603 readers) |
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About two college students in Canada who are the last 2 individuals left on planet Earth after a virus killed the rest of the population. |
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Average
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 25, 2011 |
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By the many spelling errors and stilted language i assume the author's native tongue is not English. If that is the case she really does need to get someone to edit her work before submitting it.
The story has several major problems:-
1. They are still living near decompossing bodies. Not only is the smell going to be bad but they are placing themselves at risk of infection.
2. Whilst electricity may well continue for many months, perhaps even years (if supplied by a hydro plant or wind turbines). It will stop, so they should be thinking about how they are going to feed themselves when the food starts to rot.
3. It is not clear if all life has ceased (animals as well as humans). If animals are still alive then packs of dogs could become a major problem as welll as any large predators that might have escaped from zoos/captivity.
Basically a totally stupid story and poorly told at that. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Deathnote
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Nov 7, 2008 |
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Well hey now. It wasn't <i>that</i> bad. I did find it enjoyable enough. ~_^ (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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Written by someone unfamiliar with English? Possibly. If so, you need an editor BADLY. Story is almost unreadable, silly in it's facts. Where does the power supply come from? All the engineers are dead! A possible premise, poorly thought out. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Oct 1, 2008 |
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Poorly written, poorly conceived and poorly executed. I had forgotten who this author was until I read this story. I am in quite the quandry how anyone can be so prolific, while never learning from mistakes. There are no points for me to complement in this story. (2/10)
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