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What Little Girls R 4
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Jan 14, 2002)
(This month 16756 readers) (Total 42929 readers) |
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During war, the girls were evacuated out of the city. They were sent to a family and the whole family couldn't wait to get them for their entertainment. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ltlmisst
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May 18, 2003 |
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Great theme, some nice ideas but very poorly written. Also, if you do put up with the bad writing, you find that this rather long story becomes a little repetitive. It got me off though, so can't be all bad. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
ladys_maid
(Edit) (May 25, 2003)
- It got you off and you only gave it a 3? I dread to think what happens when you find a story deserving a 9 or 10! Or maybe you have a "thing" for really lousy stories. lol
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 17, 2003 |
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Interesting idea and, if you can dig your way through the almost unintelligible grammar, the content is not that bad either. Unfortunately, the writing is so poor that I found it impossible to derive any enjoyment or excitment from the story. Shame really! (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Sep 3, 2002 |
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Sorry, couldn't make it past the first page. This author has written a number of stories here, and presumably is blessed with a good imagination. Unfortunately he needs to take a little more time and cloak his (quite possibly good) ideas in more comprehensible English (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
masostud
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Jun 15, 2002 |
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Phantastic story, taboo theme but it's a fantasy in which you can fulfill your most secret ideas. (10/10)
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