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The Briars Club
Author: J D McMasters
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(Added on Oct 11, 2008)
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The adventures of several slaves and masters in a organization that enslaves women and men for the entertainment of the members of the club. This will be a very long story that will take months to finish. |
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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A great start, lets see whats coming next, please continue writing. (10/10)
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roro25
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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great story. I want to see more of it!! Please... (10/10)
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elliott
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Dec 10, 2008 |
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Conflicts of wealth, power, intelligence and submission are always intriguing and exciting. When someone surrenders herself without any other motivation but the excitement and stimulation associated with the loss of control and responsibility for one's actions she is clearly responding to a deep psychological need. A smart, beautiful and intelligent slave striving to obey while submersing herself in the punishments and rituals of an elitist club is always an exciting conflict. Will she continue or move on to Roissy? I avidly await the next installment. (9/10)
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littleone_
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Nov 21, 2008 |
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I loved it and hope for more, more and more! Master J D McMasters did a great job. (10/10)
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jasper24
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Nov 4, 2008 |
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Interesting from the start. I hope the rest will keep the same pace. (10/10)
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AndreaDawne
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Oct 27, 2008 |
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I seen some spelling errors. But I aint complaining. The story is really good. I can not wait to see what happens next. (9/10)
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Willman1
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Oct 21, 2008 |
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This story has very good potential. The development is well paced and builds interest for the hopefully soon forth coming chapters. (9/10)
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fitzgilbert
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Oct 20, 2008 |
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on attend la suite avec impatience (9/10)
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ProbeHerrII
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Oct 16, 2008 |
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A story that certainly grabs your interest. Chapter one whets one's interest. The only shortfall so far is the distraction of the spell-check errors. I think everyone eagerly awaits the continuing of the story. (8/10)
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dennisthmn
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Oct 16, 2008 |
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I just can't for the next chapters. Its looking to be a good story (9/10)
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irishman112145
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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I found this story very compelling and can not wait for aditional chapters. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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Chuckdom19
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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A fine start to what may prove to be an interesting tale. Keep an eye open for spell-checker errors; "bye" for "by", for example. There are quite a few.
Looking forward to the next segment! (8/10)
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sissymaid
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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great start to the story.i carnt wait for to read the rest.hope we get regular updates.when i first started reading i got the feeling Amys secretary was going to come into the story later on and some how become Amys Mistress.hope so anyway. (9/10)
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masterdw
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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You are treading a line between real and fantasy. If you want to keep it real, don't get too carried away. Human beings have physical limits. You are only in the first chapter. If you want to go fantasy, that's different. You must do substantial back story, either way, but a promising start (8/10)
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