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kitten's Punishment
Author: Jake
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(Added on Nov 5, 2008)
(This month 19245 readers) (Total 33950 readers) |
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Master's feline slave is punished for touching herself without permission. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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Nicely written, with great descriptions. Alas, the angle is too narrow and the story cliché-laden. Just another submissive receiving a punishment for the one thing nobody wants their slaves to do but every slave seems to not give a fuck.
JJ (7/10)
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skullblade
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Nov 22, 2008 |
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I have to say that every thing said and done in this story was a joy to read and I will be adding all of these to my shelf so that they will be easy to find and continue to read as well. Great story and thanks for taking the time to write it and post it as well. (9/10)
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sillypony
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Nov 16, 2008 |
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I quite enjoyed this story, but as another person stated, you can't properly talk with a gag in. Other than that, quite wonderful. I loved that it was realistic- ie, him not leaving the house, etc. (9/10)
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hotblackchick
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Nov 11, 2008 |
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This was very well done! I am impressed by the depth that you were able to reach even in such a short story. It drew me in, especially with the loving gestures. Thumbs Up! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
blossom
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Nov 7, 2008 |
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it is nice to read a story that isn't based on cruelty or to much torture, shame its only going to be a short one. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
SubmissiveKitten
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Nov 7, 2008 |
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Kitten adored this story Master Jake , thank you sooooo soooo sooo much for righting it for kitten *kisses and licks u * heheh now if only i had a dom to do that to me every day :P , the story made kitten very hot shes going to have to go wash her face with cold water now *giggles* , thank you again Sir this is now kittens fave story and fave fantacy xxxx<3<3 (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jake63
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2008)
- My pleasure kitten, thanks for the idea.
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| Reviewer:
rce
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Nov 6, 2008 |
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Well done, though a common story. A bad thing is that the sub speaks on a few occations though she has a gag. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jake63
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2008)
- In a perfect world, a sub wouldn't be able to speak with a gag in their mouth. Mine have always seemed to try and talk more with the gag in. Thanks for the review.
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| Reviewer:
kittengrrl
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Nov 6, 2008 |
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I loved it! Great story! The subtle touches were perfect, and the intercourse was so well described it made me purr. Thanks so much. (9/10)
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