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The Girl
Author: Unknown
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(Added on Jan 16, 2002)
(This month 9950 readers) (Total 20043 readers) |
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An exciting short story about a man transformed into a wet dream, as part of the witness protection program, as he testified against his boss. Through a circuitous chain of events, he ends up his former boss's mistress. He/she gets loose one day and is recounting the events to a reporter, before being interrupted by two of the boss's goons. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Aug 1, 2003 |
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You have the frame for a far longer and personal story, just take time to develop and write. (2/10)
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