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Jack's Place
Author: The Technician
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(Added on Dec 17, 2008)
(This month 12958 readers) (Total 21540 readers) |
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A weekly Friday night pool tournament becomes very interesting when “Jack” decides to play in the final round. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Tleanne5664
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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I liked that it was writtien POV of a third person. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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Delicious little fait-divers. Not too short, not too long, just a great telling of a wicked happening, ending in a master stroke.
You are, indeed, a Technician. Thanks for sharing.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jayden McZimmer
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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excellent story. i hope we get some more chapters on what happens during the weekend of slavery! (9/10)
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