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The Chair
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Jan 3, 2009)
(This month 36684 readers) (Total 67678 readers) |
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Jenny had built the chair for fun, but something went terribly wrong when she used it. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
sulkon
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May 9, 2012 |
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Unhurried pace creating atmosphere of suspense makes this story a delightful read. Perhaps it could use some more details concerning Jenny's appearance and background - it would even heighten reader's involvement. But great work nonetheless. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 14, 2009 |
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Thoroughly enjoyable, tho similar subjects have been posted lately, with 'better' handling.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 6, 2009 |
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therating speaks for itself, excellent (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
aweta69
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Jan 5, 2009 |
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WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU for taking the time to put so much thought into this. WHAT A SHOW. This needs to be voiced with a friend. Someone strapped into a chair reading it aloud as the gears slowly rotate.
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Shibari
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Jan 5, 2009 |
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One word: hot (10/10)
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