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DEVASTATION
Author: drkfetyshnyghts
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(Added on Jan 3, 2009)
(This month 166576 readers) (Total 238253 readers) |
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A story of abject subjugation and extreme fetishism chillingly described through the eyes of the sadistic lesbian Dr Sabirah Najwa, a clinical and behavioral psychologist. Also, in part told through the eyes of the victim.... the attractive, statuesque City high-flyer Petra. A single mother with a 'perfect' life, plucked from her normal, privileged world. Her sexuality exploited, twisted, enhanced and used to ensure her trip down into the Vortex is one-way only. |
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Alix
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Jan 4, 2012 |
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Awesome,this is the second time round for me with part one, great story,thanks. (10/10)
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drkfetyshnyghts
(Edit) (Jan 4, 2012)
- Many thanks for your kind comments.... there are more of my stories, albeit paid for here;
http://www.a1adultebooks.com/ebooks/a569.htm
Enjoy!
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lbfm
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Oct 27, 2010 |
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fantastic... very well written and oh so sadistic (10/10)
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marmadukegrove
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Oct 17, 2010 |
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A fascinating story, very well written and describing very carefully an exciting process of debasement and corruption. Even when the plot itself is improbable, the characters are absolutamente real and credible. (10/10)
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Fiction Fan
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Mar 5, 2009 |
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Awesome story. The combination of bizarre medical experiments and rubber bondage was a real turn on for me. I wish more stories like this were being made. My only problem with it is toward the end of Part 3. What happened between Petra and her daughter being rescued and Sabirah getting enslaved to Victoria and pregnant. (10/10)
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Olive
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Feb 19, 2009 |
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This story, DEVASTATION, rocked my female boat. As a woman, I wanted to hate it. Absolutely. But as a human, I can’t deny its sheer power, and the utter fascination of it. I can’t believe that some readers have said it’s too long. Are you kidding me? Most stories on this site are altogether too short and underdeveloped, juvenile actually. This story is a veritable Marienbad bath, a spa, relaxing and deep, and going on and on and on. And I love it. God help me, it makes me horny as hell. The slow, measured, deliberate buildup is intoxicating; the payoff, as the title promises, totally devastating.
The author is exploring the extremes of human behavior, of human needs, and how actual ‘evil’ frequently overcomes potential ‘good’ -- just like in real life. It’s kinky to its beautiful core and yet at the same time, rings psychologically true, and on *many* levels. The author’s imagination is running wild – and isn’t that what we all want? And hope for?
It’s a tour de force.
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mistressjane2
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one of the best story's i have read in a long time (10/10)
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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(Jan 04, 2009) Seems 2009 couldn't have started better for me... Just off (finally) reading Headhunter's magnificent story, I stumble across this here polished diamond...
As a first installment, this can count. Wonderfully concocted, with a simple but oh-so effective premise.
Although the year is still young, I know not many submissions will top this...
Sublime.
*EDIT*
Already read part 2 elsewhere. Fantastic continuation. One error though, and a mistake that's often made: you state that the red hair is a telltale sign of their Irish descendance.
Sorry to say that the Irish have black hair by nature. It's the Scottish who have the red hair gene...
JJ (10/10)
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vario
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Very good and extremely hot story. I am really looking forward to coming chapters. (10/10)
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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Superb piece of work, very well written and very believable. I would expect that something on these lines must very likely have happened somwhere at sometime, this brings it very much to life, more, more, more please. (10/10)
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Jan 15, 2009 |
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spectacular, psychological, different, delicious! (10/10)
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Jan 15, 2009 |
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Very well written. I really enjoyed it. I am looking forward to read future installments.
(9/10)
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paulopost
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Jan 14, 2009 |
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This story is so original and so well written!
I really hope that we'll discover something more about the "devastation" process! (10/10)
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rocket71
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Jan 10, 2009 |
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A wonderful story! I could not stop reading. Sure hope there is more to come. (10/10)
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Incredible hot bdms story with a very good plot, congratulations. Please on second part lots of degrading actions, for instance proud Petra and her daughter performing as circus animals adopting debasing positions in front of a former girl friend of Steffi or a former rival of Petra,or serving as sex maids for a wide audience of acquaintences etc. All spiced with extremely degrading dialogs. (10/10)
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Incredible story...in a good way. Petra's descent, and loss of control...I cannot wait for the continuation. (10/10)
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Falcon
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Deeply dark psychological thriller. Absolute power in a lesbian context. Very well written. The time author spent establishing the characters and personalities of Petra and Sabirah at the beginning was very well spent for what follows. Looking forward to next installment. Can Petra be taken down still further? (10/10)
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TheVariableX
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Jan 7, 2009 |
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Magnificent.
I eagerly await more story contributions from the author. (10/10)
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davewakely
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Slow, relentless, intoxicating build up throughout the story. I don't know that we will see better this year.
(10/10)
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slow, relentless and very arousing! (9/10)
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worzel
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Jan 6, 2009 |
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To be honest I could not believe what I was reading
and was spellbound from start to finish.
A genuine ten out of ten, very highly recommended! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 6, 2009 |
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nice job nice story (8/10)
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bullfinch
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Excellent. A very exciting buildup, hopefully with more to come. Well written. One of the best stories I have read. (10/10)
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TOXIS
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Jan 5, 2009 |
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This is a wonderful story and a terrifically told tale. If this is a beginning, I cannot wait for more. Along with Zippers, Cutty, it's going to be a must-read. (10/10)
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briggis
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Jan 4, 2009 |
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Super (10/10)
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