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The Fantasy
Author: Micki
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(Added on Jan 4, 2009)
(This month 8788 readers) (Total 14968 readers) |
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A first time Mistress dominating her lover, who is normally her master. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
xSoCalCynicx
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Apr 17, 2011 |
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Not a bad story, but the spelling and grammar errors grew more annoying as the story ran. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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i like the theme a bit different in the switching (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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Good story, I enjoyed reading it, but it had lots of errors. And some of them repeat all over the story (e.g, orgasim instead of orgasm). You should proofread your stories before submitting them and use a spellchecker. (7/10)
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