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4BDN-PLN8
Author: The Technician
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(Added on Jan 28, 2009)
(This month 25843 readers) (Total 36662 readers) |
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Far in the future a female star ship captain discovers the dangers of long-term space travel in a ship staffed by robots that follow her mind commands. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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xandramiel
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May 20, 2016 |
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I like the concept and the descriptions, as well as the pace. But I would have liked better if it were longer. The ending also looks weak to me. (6/10)
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zemauer
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Feb 2, 2011 |
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''What happened then I can only describe as a " mind explosion." It was so intense that it caused most of the ServoMechs to break mind link and go offline into protective mode for several seconds.``
Ahahahahaha. And there's a nice mystery too as to what 4BDN-PLN8 means. Very well done. (10/10)
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pangent617
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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Excellent yarn and it even stays in context. I rather think it was a chore to describe the sex sessions as you did but it fit perfectly. It could have been a bit longer and the sessions could have continue to intensify before The Captain would recognize the "event horizon" as it were. Great story I will read more on the site if you have it. (9/10)
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notsofast
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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I'm not a sci-fi fan but this is clever and amusing. In a sense it tells the story of the evolution of the porn industry through the eyes of an innocent robot traveling at the edge of the galaxy, in the company of a horny female pilot. A delight. (9/10)
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mmarcus72
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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I enjoyed the idea of Id becoming the controlling factor. Id with no filters of the awake mind. Interesting concept. (9/10)
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mustafa.fuch1
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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Brilliant concept very well written, a very pleasant contrast to the standardised cloned stories which seem to have begun to proliferate on here recently.
I look forward to reading more of your stories. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 29, 2009 |
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Exquisite little science-fiction story. Not the usual fodder where the SF is used as a backdrop for not having to explain some ludicrousities (is that a word?), but a thorough, wholesome, well-fitting futuristic tale with a totally believable and even possible plot.
And a "gold plated unit for formal occasions"? Sounds familiar. As long as we're not all doooomed, it's okay, I guess.
Excellent, ingenious story.
JJ (10/10)
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