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A Command Performance
Author: Mich Mach
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(Added on Jan 28, 2009)
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A young female British army Officer finds her new Sergeant to much to handle |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 9, 2009 |
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nicely written has all the elements of the type i love to read (9/10)
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notsofast
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As I'm not in the British (or any) military it took a bit of patience to get through the first third of what I assume will be one part of a multipart story. Then the action starts between an agressive non-comm and his hot but somewhat submissive female commanding officer, in her office! Does that really go on in the military? ;-) I look forward to Part 2. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 29, 2009 |
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Most promising and intriguing start. Very good set-up, as are the outlines of the characters.
Looking out to the next installments, Mich.
Slight remark: please do a small proofread before posting, as there's a lot of periods that are missing and quite a few mind-boggling spelling mistakes and/or swapping words ("through" instead of "threw", for example).
JJ (9/10)
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