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Alice & Amanda 3: Mistress Amanda
Author: Alina Aamu
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(Added on Feb 1, 2009)
(This month 9851 readers) (Total 16944 readers) |
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After a long wait, the tables have turned and our main character gets to submit to Amanda for a day. |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Mar 25, 2010 |
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I agree with JimmyJump the little asides and jokes they have makes these two charaters seem like real people. The only thing I would suggest is a bit more care in editing, I noticed several spelling errors (too when two was meant) in this story and at least one in each of the earlier stories.
But please keep up the good story line. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 6, 2009 |
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For some reason, with this third installment of Alice and Amanda, the strange magic that floated through the first two stories, is gone here.
It's like both characters have been dreaming for a while, only to wake-up to a harsher reality than what was envisioned in the dreams.
Luckily, thanks to the spot-on 'feel' of the author, the frivolity, the playfulness is still there.
The knowledge that the two women are enjoying each other thoroughly, poking slight fun at one another all the time, adds to the realism of the tale.
Well done, again.
JJ (9/10)
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