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Dr. Benson's Office
Author: redleg112
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(Added on Jan 30, 2002)
(This month 66376 readers) (Total 117721 readers) |
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Wife gets revenge on cheating. Husband turns him over to local female Dr for traing at clinic. f/m nc tease denial torture |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jrnd711
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Jul 26, 2012 |
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Very enjoyable reading if you're not obsessed with correct form. Most readers here could care less about it. If you want to encourage a writer to continue a story series don't whack them with a very low score and destroy their motivation. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
delish
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Nov 29, 2004 |
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I'm a little stunned that anyone rated this story a ten, given that ten is, by definition, a writing that could compete with published authors. I realize it's a bit difficult to come across teasing/denial stories, and while this one has potential, the lack of even the most basic grammar/punctuation made it almost unreadable for me. The story itself would rate more highly with me given the proper editing, however. I would strongly encourage the author to continue writing, and simply pay more attention to the details. (3/10)
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alphie712fr
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Sep 29, 2003 |
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Not a bad story but needs serious editing... (3/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 29, 2003 |
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I normaly have no taste or intrest in FemDom stories, this is one very rare exceotion (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 28, 2003 |
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It would be a great story, but simple English mistakes throughout made it quite difficult to read. A rewrite with proper grammar and punctuation would help considerably. (5/10)
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slavetobenamed
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Mar 29, 2003 |
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Great story would love to see what happens. (7/10)
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selcin
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Jul 22, 2002 |
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The best F/m story I have ever read! (10/10)
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beta
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Mar 21, 2002 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed the story, being an enthusiast of orgasm denial torture. I read the first two parts months ago in a Yahoo group and was delighted to find a third installment here. The author could use a little help in basic grammar, but the story itself is very erotic. Hope to see more. (9/10)
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hyphen666
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Feb 3, 2002 |
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This has the makings of a very good story, but the lack of even rudimentary proofreading is utterly ruining things by creating way too many distractions from misspelling, typos, bad grammar, etc, etc, etc. (6/10)
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boundmale
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Feb 2, 2002 |
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What a great story for those of us that fantasize about being teased and tormented by beautiful women. I could almost feel his frustration while being denied release.
Can hardly wait for the story to continue! (10/10)
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