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Vanishing Act
Author: Richard Alexander
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(Added on Jan 30, 2002)
(This month 153696 readers) (Total 259003 readers) |
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First there were the emails, then there was the package left in the park where Jan Sherwood did her early morning exercises - the package with Jan's name on it, with the handcuffs inside. That was when Jan reached the certain conclusion that she was being watched. When it came, the abduction was brutal and clinical in its efficiency. But what was the most scary feature was the timing and the lengths Jan's captor had gone to account for her disappearance. Subjected to torture while kept bound in the man's basement, Jan gave in to his demands for access to bank accounts, and saw her entire life destroyed in front of her eyes. Only her desire for revenge kept her focussed as she slowly grew to realise what the man had in store for her for the rest of her life - or until he grew tired of her... |
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littletired
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Apr 4, 2010 |
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This is one of my favorite stories on this site. I could not put it down. I loved that the ending was such a surprise! (10/10)
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lacey138
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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Excelent writing!!! If this were a book I would have bought it after reading the first two paragraphs. (10/10)
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subcatheee
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Nov 1, 2008 |
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It was long but enjoyable. Could use spell check. (9/10)
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blossom
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Mar 1, 2008 |
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great story, i love the ending, top marks from me, i wish there were more storys like it, where the is a good plot for revenge (10/10)
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spinica
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Feb 25, 2008 |
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this excellent writing from a creative dom and you can tell that a very lerned and skilled sadist. (10/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Aug 30, 2007 |
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Simply incredible. I've read nothing like it on this site. (10/10)
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Msgoodeatsdiner
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Aug 26, 2006 |
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This is an awesome story! it kept me hooked from beginning to end. I love how the tables were turned in the end but wish she would have tortured him a bit more. (10/10)
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laursie
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Feb 27, 2006 |
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I have to say this is the best story I have read on here so far. Very well thought out and believable. The sex or violence didn't overywhelm the storyline but inhanced it. Oh yeah I am always one for a good gottcha in the end. (10/10)
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tragedy3
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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this story was excellent. everything was believable, the writing of it was also very good.
great ending. would like for you to write some more, will be on the lookout for anythong else you have written. (10/10)
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Ranai
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Mar 31, 2005 |
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Outstanding and highly recommended. Vanishing Act is a plausible nc story.
(Wishful thinking has its rightful place in the realm of sexual fantasies. That's why there are so many fanciful tales in the 'nonconsensual-with-inbuilt-denial' genre. With characters who get subjected to all sorts of activities against their will, and in retrospect declare themselves ever so happy about the entire nc proceedings, because after all they forced them to become the slaves they were meant to be, right?)
In Vanishing Act, by contrast, there is wishful thinking, yes – but not in the plot. It's in the mind of a very special character. The narrator's point of view dissects those lies. The plot is suspenseful and the narrative flows well. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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I found the story outstanding, I am not going to dicet it, to find this point, or try and claify that point
it was refreshing to read a long story like this, i hope you do more in the future (10/10)
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longrover
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Nov 7, 2004 |
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My favorite of the author's works. Very well done in all the usual (plot, character, paragraph, sentence, ... ) categories. Thanks! (10/10)
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WackySpurtz
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Wow! The hero gets a bilateral orchidectomy. Good writing, but what's the point? I guess I'm of the school that thinks that porn should excite lust. Balls being cut off seems to stray pretty far from this, IMO. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
headhunter
(Edit) (Feb 26, 2005)
- In one sense, you are right. Porn usually does not involve this level of retribution. But good literature does. The result raises the story from porn to a tale of morality. The writing is excellent, and Mr. Alexander even knows how to spell and punctuate - two skills that most porn authors lack.
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Boggart
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2016)
- Wow! Thanks for giving away the end with no spoiler alert! You know, some people read reviews before reading an entire story. How about a little discretion next time?
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Cleo671
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Dec 26, 2003 |
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Great story, very well written.
Only two snags, the passport aspect in Australia,a photo needs to be signed for by someone that knows the applicant and secondly the ease with which she was able to obtain identification and pass herself off as female still.
Apart from those two technicalities..geez 10 out of 10.
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bondage_bunny
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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I really enjoyed this story. The quality of writing here is quite good. And the story drew me quickly in with interesting, erotic situations and realistic characters. I think that this story sets a high bar for others on this site--this is the level of writing we should all be trying to obtain. (10/10)
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newayindco
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Sep 6, 2003 |
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very good written (10/10)
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julise
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Sep 5, 2003 |
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I can't believe that this hasn't been reviewed yet. I absolutely loved this story. It was very well written and believable. In my opinion it is some of the best writing on here. (10/10)
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