|
|
|
|
|
Hopelessly Devoted
Author: Cruel_M
|
| |
(Added on Mar 25, 2009)
(This month 16679 readers) (Total 26305 readers) |
| |
Online slave is ordered to sell everything and move to her Master, and some surprises await her, even from this Sadistic Man. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 1 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
100% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
| Highest
Rating: (7/10) |
| Lowest
Rating: (7/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 26, 2009 |
| |
First true to myself: you need an editor, and a spell-checker. Some of the mistakes are silly.
To the story; not bad. Short, could be expanded to provide more detail, but good also that way. The occasional short-short is a relief from 700mb monster tales. More descriptions of the girl would be good; physical and psychological.
Good luck on your next tale! (7/10)
|
|
|
About 