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The Sweet Enslavement of Samantha
Author: DarkShadow Eternal
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(Added on Feb 3, 2002)
(This month 21332 readers) (Total 54396 readers) |
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She had been a slut and teaser for too long, finally someone decided to get revenge on her. She was abducted and turned into a sex slave. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 29, 2005 |
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i realy enjoyed the story, every now and then you need something to read a bit different, this fit the bill at the time (8/10)
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Abe Froman
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Mar 8, 2005 |
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A good story, with some significant issues to be addressed. Grammar/spelling is a problem. Some parts of the plot are just too convenient. I'd also like to read more of Sam's thoughts and a bit less technical descriptions. Seems to end just when things get really interesting. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Beethovenfan
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Apr 26, 2003 |
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I read this because of the 10/10 reviews, but I cannot rate it that highly. The writing style needs to be developed which I'm sure the writer could do. The dressing of Samantha in her predictable fetish gear and the dildoes etc. just wasn't very erotic IMHO. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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Jan 6, 2003 |
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The story is OK, but I like heavier B&D action in my story. My main issue with the story is the fractured grammar. I liked the story, and I did read it thru to the "end for now", but I would prefer a little proof-reading. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
RubbrSpatula
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Mar 5, 2002 |
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Not a big fan of "Samantha". The writer gets lost between present and past tense, and that's a big distraction. Nothing quite kills the realism of a good story like "I suddenly switch to present tense without warning you. I write a less-than-glowing review like this."
THe story itself wasn't bad, but it wasn't exceptional, and the writing reads more like a rough draft begging for a good editor. (3/10)
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Engineer
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Feb 16, 2002 |
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This story hast just one fault: It cries for a sequel ... (10/10)
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rilco
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Feb 7, 2002 |
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the beginning of this story has all to become an evergreen!!! I hope we will get more of this... thx (10/10)
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