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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
(Edit) |
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Dec 24, 2011 |
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Excellent story! I wish you would continue this story. I'm interested in Jasmine & what her future holds with Michelle. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 21, 2010 |
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Wow a very hot story with good characterization and plenty of action. There are a number of errors that do spoil the story a bit - normally i would only give this story an 8 or 9 because of the errors, but i liked the story so much i can overlook them.
1. There are a number of spelling errors, most of which are a word spelt correctly but being the wrong word in that situation.
2. There a few grammatical mistakes, but not to many. The one that really stood out was when Bitch went to her new home Jasmin was kneeled, this should have been was kneeling or was knelt.
3. The most glaring error was in some places the author has the wrong name for the person. This, i imagine is quite common when you have sections devoted to one persons feelings. i have seen this problem overcome by using different type faces for different people (or could try a change in colour).
Having said all that i enjoyed the story immensly and hope we do not have too long to wait for the continueing saga, long may it run. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jxexbxuxs
(Edit) |
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Jan 6, 2010 |
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excellent story, please write more (9/10)
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