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Jenny Comes Home Late
Author: WhoKnows
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(Added on Feb 27, 2002)
(This month 14171 readers) (Total 28526 readers) |
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High school senior Jenny gets home much later than her curfew, earning her mother's wrath and her stepfather's discipline. As her punishment unfolds, she realizes just what a naughty little girl she is. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
charissa
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Oct 3, 2008 |
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Simmeringly enjoyable. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
T-Luv
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May 20, 2003 |
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Tasty! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Feb 27, 2002 |
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If this is a first effort, it's not too bad. The grammar and writing are acceptable. The plot has been used by a couple of hundred previous authors, some better, most worse. The ending is not unexpected thanks to some brief character development that was initially done by the author. To sum it up, I would encourage the author to continue to ply his or her hobby based on this story. (6/10)
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