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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
yag
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Jul 25, 2014 |
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The story is extremely well written. It's funny and imaginative and packed with F/f rope bondage that's original and described in great detail. A very entertaining read. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jul 30, 2012 |
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Updated 7/30/12: Another excellent and erotic chapter of bondage. Im hoping the next chapter has Heather involved in some forced sexual acts. As good as the writing is, and the bondage is clever and deliciously cruel in a sexual way, I'm wanting a little more hot and erotic action!.............Updated 5/20/12...Part 9 was fabulous! My only criticism is that it ended to soon. This is a spectacular, erotic, sexy & fun story & I can't wait for part 10. I'm hoping it will be posted quickly, as waiting another 3 1/2 months would be as much torture as what some of the girls are going thru with their wonderfully creative bondage!.....................A very good story & a must read. Although I'm not impressed with Heather at all. For a special agent she keeps getting captured & for a sister, she's enjoying life while Samantha is being tortured. What happened with Alicia & the other female FIRM members after part 7? I'm looking forward to part 9, but am also ready for the confrontation between Heather & Mallory. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Ira66610
(Edit) (Feb 2, 2012)
- Thanks, all, for the kind words. This (starting with Part 8) was actually sent as a separate Part II story, but somehow got placed back under the original. There will most certainly be a confrontation between Heather and Mallory in the near future. Thanks again for the feedback.
Ari
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| Reviewer:
kittkatt1
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Feb 4, 2012 |
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After a lengthy break, glad you're writing again! Your word pictures are captivating. Love the way you switch back and forth between events involving different characters...keeps the overall storyline very interesting. You have a gift for writing - keep it up so we can enjoy. (10/10)
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geo001
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Jan 30, 2012 |
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Fantastic story would love to see Sam forced to eat Heather possibility that Sonya might capture all ? i just love lesbian domination!! (10/10)
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mrfrosty
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Nov 22, 2011 |
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great story...very detailed ties...was hoping the little sister would have been forced to lick the big sister without knowing after finishing her friend but very enjoyable (10/10)
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RealityExplorer
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Jan 27, 2011 |
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Man this story is awesome. Just tell me that number 6 isn't the final chapter. (10/10)
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lawson83
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Jan 15, 2010 |
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Fantastic characters. Sure hope that poor Heather doesn't find herself in any more trouble. Heh heh. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ty_M_Goode
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Dec 30, 2009 |
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Ari, you're amazing. Once again, a fantastic story, great imagery, ruthless restraints. I hope you have chapter two already on file and will be posting it soon.
Ty (10/10)
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