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Gorean Tavern Slut
Author: slavegirlemily
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(Added on Dec 20, 2009)
(This month 81127 readers) (Total 108551 readers) |
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One day in the life of a gorean(ish) tavern slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (9/10) |
Lowest
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| Reviewer:
mstrger
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Nov 7, 2010 |
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Same problems as everyone else with formatting. Liked the story though (9/10)
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lbfm
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Oct 15, 2010 |
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I thought it was pretty enjoyable, worth a higher mark than the average of 6 before I gave my rating. I love the scenario where women are worth nothing, even less than cattle. Great writing about how the girl feels about all this. Good stuff! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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Not in the mood today to quibble over formatting and grammar and spelling and punctuation marks and whatever.
"Gorean tavern Slut" is a great read. It is also very well written, to the point the story captures your attention right from the start, to not let go until you reached the last sentence.
In-between, you are confronted with all kinds of kinky and sometimes right-out over the top stuff, but it works. Wonderfully.
Neat.
JJ (9/10)
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masochisticsissi
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May 3, 2010 |
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i enjoyed the story very much. The only problem i had with it was the repetition of the manner of emily's capture and transport. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slavegirlemily
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Jan 5, 2010 |
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Sorry about the formatting, i suppose that will teach me to try and format the stories for html beforehand they looked fine editing in word. if you want to read the originals, well on my blog that is go to http://mistressslavegirlfantasies.blogspot.com/ & http://goreankajiratavernslut.blogspot.com/
and sorry about the & i quite like them though
as for being a native speaker i guess my gorean to english translator is broken again i must get Master to fix it.
I am British & this is how i type English, sorry
slavegirlemily (5/10)
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oldpervert1
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Dec 25, 2009 |
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While the story is 'Gor-ISH' and not in the original style of the bulk of the Gor tales, it is interesting. Please work on paragraph and sentence structure. I liked the way it started with live action intermixed with little bits of Gor-history, but the action seems to die out. (5/10)
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jkim
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Dec 24, 2009 |
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I agree with the first reveiw, and i am a true gorean slave girl at heart. Gor without siriks and piercings is no Gor that i recognize. something happened to the formatting, true, but the use of "&" is very irritating. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Dec 24, 2009 |
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What's in a name? A lot, obviously!
I love the beginning and I love some of the ideas in the story but unfortunately the bad formatting and total lack of editing make this story very hard to read. With a little work (and a native speaking editor) it could shine. As it is, the reader stumbles over too many mistakes and missing words. (5/10)
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