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The Newest Slave
Author: Captv8td
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(Added on Jan 12, 2010)
(This month 92892 readers) (Total 127868 readers) |
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Angela Dawson was interested in buying a second slavegirl for her family and went back to the market where she bought her first girl. Then, a series of events resulted in her discovering that she had a submissive side. But the more that she explored that side of her, the darker things seemed to get for her and she experienced a never-ending stream of surprises. |
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| Reviewer:
exbiidelhi2012
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Feb 7, 2012 |
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hi captv8td you rocks........recently i read your story Cuchilla Captivity which is also great but this one is superb. please write some more abot this story theme like becoming a slave from slaver/boss etc.
super erotic and my all time favourite story.....if possible add some prequel in between auction and among other slavers also (10/10)
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graf01
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Jan 28, 2010 |
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Excellent. Very good story, and good written.Looking forward for more, again with beastiality, more details about Beastility would be good.
(10/10)
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Soryaan
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Jan 24, 2010 |
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Love your Story ...
especially the Beastiality / Mf - incest part ... yeah i am weird that way
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just one tiny thing ...
The rescue and welcoming back to the family seems so short :) could you
rewrite it into something longer ?
How was the mother marked ? what happend to her during the auction ? What
will the kids do with her now that they have lost all inhibtions ? :)
well maybe you can spin that into a new story ... loe to read yours
(9/10)
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littleone_
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Jan 23, 2010 |
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One word, excellent. (10/10)
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nosympathy
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Jan 23, 2010 |
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The plot was very well conceived taking Angela down her future path realistically.
The visual descriptions were good and believable.
I certainly hope there's a following story describing her time with both her family and Cedric. Do they re-insert her nose ring permanently? Does Cedric add his marks to what she currently has? Lots of ways to go with this one. Great job! (10/10)
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mechgogo
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Jan 22, 2010 |
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Writing a story that arouses and entertains takes skill. Writing one that turns on and compells the reader to finish it in one sitting when they would normaly find certain key plot elements personally repugnant takes TALENT. Good pacing, tight characters, solid dialog, SMOKING HOT erotic action and a fully realized setting make the latest trip to what I'm starting to call your "Tempest 'verse" a great read. You've once again shown us why you are one of the most popular writers on this site. Thank you for the contributions you make and please, keep em coming. In every sense of the word ;) . (9/10)
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snoods3nugget
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Jan 20, 2010 |
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I've loved all your stories and this is the best so far. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
snoods3nugget
(Edit) (Feb 2, 2010)
- Oops. You ended about three chapters too soon. Did you lose interest, Captv8td? This was your best story, but you suddenly cut it short.
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BruceCC
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Jan 16, 2010 |
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This is as close to a perfect story as I have ever read on this site. Looking forward to more. (10/10)
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Cody Maverick
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Jan 14, 2010 |
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Wow! I really enjoyed this. You are such a talented writer! I can't wait for the next part. I'm looking forward to the hunt and all. I'm most interested in what happens after Angela gets home. It will be interesting to see how relationships evolve with her husband, family, slaves, and friends. Thanks for all of your time and effort to write this!
Best Regards (10/10)
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