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The Sverf
Author: Fife Story Teller
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(Added on Jan 28, 2010)
(This month 14687 readers) (Total 26889 readers) |
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Imagine a world where secretly, silently, the human population is being invaded and no-one knows. By a people who are facinated by sex and bdsm, having no concept of this themselves. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 16, 2010 |
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Far too short. Please try to wait until you have at least 10k of story before posting. There just wasn't enough here to get a feel for the story, though there was enough to tell that the author can write. Good technical skills. EDIT: Rating raised to '8' after part two added. The story is becoming clearer. (8/10)
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