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The Prosecutor
Author: Abe
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(Added on Feb 14, 2010)
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An unethical female prosecutor is tortured by those she wronged, using some new technology. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
CrazedDog
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May 11, 2010 |
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A good story with a solid premise. Would have liked to read more being done besides the modification. I believe that expanding on the punishment aspect with solid word pictures would have made this a 10! (8/10)
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Josef10
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Feb 17, 2010 |
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I think it was quiet good. Hm near to very good.
Make a other one, Please. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Feb 14, 2010 |
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Started very well but I think you lost it with the cow magnets and numbing her, it would have been so much more enjoyable to hear her scream!
Still it was very good 10/10 the first part (8/10)
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