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The Price of Innocence
Author: Captv8td
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(Added on Feb 20, 2010)
(This month 119320 readers) (Total 159679 readers) |
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Innocence was recently graduated from college and newly married as she started to work on her PhD. But her doctoral studies and her marriage were turning out to be surprisingly different from what she expected. Her slow slide into slavery caught her by surprise and the number of people who claimed her as their slave was shocking to her. Everything seemed surreal as she became more and more submissive to the wills of the dominant people who filled her life. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Guillaume Bourgogne
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Sep 30, 2012 |
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This is brilliant story, very well written. I wish it never ended... More development with the other subs in the story might be also of interest, especially with the transformation of Crissy that is clearly introduced, yet not developed. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Panther007
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Oct 2, 2011 |
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Here is a story I wish never ended. Wonderful in it's nasty erotic detail. Loved every minute of reading this. (10/10)
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Heracles
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Apr 9, 2010 |
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Quite your best yet. Like your reader who has collected a private universe, I intend to do the very same but with a view to a little research in to how your sadism appears to increase - thankfully not enough to sicken.
I am almost sad that I read THE END, but truthfully, where could it go now. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 8, 2010 |
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Upto now i have always looked forward to reading a story by Captv8td, but i have to agree with Major Littmann, this is not in another universe but just today's USA. The story line just seems to be unbelievable, surely no wife (and later daughter) allow themselves to be sold (well 25% ownership) to another person. I know this is supposed to be reluctant slavery, but there is nothing forcing Innocence to do what she does not want to do, similar with Katy.
Now if this was in an imaginery country like in "Enslaved in Europe" by Schlank (in Literotica) people can agree to a term of slavery but once that contract has been signed then it has the full weight of the imaginery countries law enforcing it. The story while still fantasy becomes more believeable.
For me to give a higher rating to this story, i suggest Captv8td's next chapter shows the girls have been under some mind control drug - perhaps with the girls finding out and turning the situation round to their way of liking - remember Innocence is married and she has good grounds for divorce and would surely get her hands on most of the $5m her husband recently received from Mark, I am sure she could live very nicely on that sum of money and from the extra blackmail money from all the others that have used her .... just a thought. (7/10)
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Curtis
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Apr 7, 2010 |
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Good, but seemed to go off the rails in part seven. It's like this started out to be one story, then morphed sometime in part six, around when the younger girl offers to trade 48 hours as a slave for twelve hours topping Innocence. It also got a little boring, since all of the women are described as being equally beautiful, with the same huge incredibly firm breasts. It started as a '9' and ended as a '7'. (8/10)
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Major Littmann
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Feb 22, 2010 |
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I think from the authors coments I was a great story and expecting it to be set in a universe which was different, yet this is just standard USA and not all that believeabe, there's some great imagery in there but the underlying story doesn't hold together (8/10)
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Lillyrose123
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Feb 21, 2010 |
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Very nice... very arousing... when do we see the second part???? (10/10)
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akim
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Feb 21, 2010 |
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I like most of the storys of "Captv8td" - like "Spring Break" or "Gardener". I enjoyed this one most. It has a nice slow beginning and invites many good potential development. I wish a slow progress and the opportunity of a long time story.
(10/10)
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