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The Treatment of Alice
Author: KysaQ
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(Added on Mar 7, 2010)
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Alice is the bright, pretty hardworking housemaid at Colville Hall. Unfortunately everybody enjoyed playing with Alice. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
theroadtoad
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Mar 23, 2010 |
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Excellent story! I have read other work by the author on other sites and love the work. Please do more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
KysaQ
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2010)
- Thank you for the comments you and others have left. I rarely post to the net these days although if there is sufficient interest I'll add one or two more tales over the coming months.
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gypsiecowboy
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Mar 23, 2010 |
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fun. not great fiction of course. no great descriptive detail. no blow by blow. but fun. and definitely something about which to masturbate! (9/10)
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YNHumiliator
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Mar 19, 2010 |
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Very nicely executed narrative. Total power exchange. Not often a story gets the "coldness" required to make the scenario believable. I enjoyed it a lot! Hoping you'll write more.. (9/10)
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Shadeaux
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Mar 13, 2010 |
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Good story. I am hot. More please (9/10)
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Pearlgem
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Mar 12, 2010 |
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Lovely, K. Very nicely written, interesting, psychologically believable, engaging. I look forward to reading anything else you write. (9/10)
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skullchaser
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Mar 12, 2010 |
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Captured the flavor of that writing style very well; very original concept and development of the tale. The story had a good pace with just enough detail to keep the reader's imagination engaged. Story stands very well on it's own with no need for a sequel, but still leaves the possibility open if the mood strikes the author. Would like to see more stories from this writer. (9/10)
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Jake Olive
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Mar 10, 2010 |
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Tremendously strong storytelling. Your tale is both subtle and powerful in design. Very well conceived and executed. Thank you for sharing that.....great work. (10/10)
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groucho
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Mar 8, 2010 |
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nice preamble of the age old format. Enjoyed it as far as it went. (7/10)
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