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You visit LA
Author: Abe
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(Added on Mar 7, 2010)
(This month 13142 readers) (Total 21487 readers) |
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A tourist is kidnapped, gang raped, and tortured. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Tease Cathy
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Mar 20, 2010 |
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In general, I really liked this story. I've found more often that not those in second person tend to be better if a writer can stay in that perspective, which you did very well.
Mechanically this was well done as well, as spelling and grammar errors can seriously distract from the overall plot line.
I have read other things from you, and thus far, this is my favorite. (7/10)
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