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FM2000S
Author: mustafa.fuch1
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(Added on Mar 30, 2010)
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Fiona goes for haircut but gets the full FM2000/S (Special) makeover. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Apr 4, 2010 |
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This would've been worth an '8', except that right at the end it reads as though some of the paragraphs are out of order. This is an amusing story, even though totally unbelievable. (7/10)
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Michael247
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Apr 1, 2010 |
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This story had a few things working for it: a creative interesting plot and some fantastic props, but the story telling was a little flat. You can read an in depth review at http://michaelalexanderstories.blogspot.com/search/label/Reviews (6/10)
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- Replied by:
mustafa.fuch1
(Edit) (Apr 6, 2010)
- Never had an in depth review before, wow the insight, gee it must have took twice as long to write the review as I took to write the story!
OK the story line is a bit weak, I didn't plan it, it evolved, and yeah they all live happily ever after, well some do, and yeah you could build my machines, it matters to me that the machines could work
And why 2000s, well it was posted as FM2000 but the story was lost in the late 2009 server failure and it got 8 or 9/10 back then.
But thanks for taking the time for the review, check out this guys website its really something.
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