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The Test of Time
Author: subtle
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(Added on Mar 16, 2002)
(This month 8900 readers) (Total 16658 readers) |
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Sub is required to please her Dom in a limited time period with a unique set of circumstances to overcome. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Apr 9, 2011 |
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Despite the short length, the story grabbed me by laying out a scene snippet and I enjoyed it. (7/10)
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JadedKitty
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Dec 25, 2005 |
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Fantastic. Short but sweet and definitely inspired me! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Samantha
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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I like the idea of this very short story. A quick scenery set up, then straight onto the guts of the plot. What fascinated me most was the ending. It was left hanging there and any reader was left to their own imagination. I liked that. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faye Kname
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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This is SO stupid and pointless that I feel sure the other reviews were made by the idiot author. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
bracemaiden
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2011)
- Wow. That is one of the harshest reviews I've seen! Seems you need a good beating!
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Dec 26, 2004 |
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A gem of a short-short. Clearly drawn characters, a crisis to come, a quick twist in the outcome.
And the chuckle from the Master is just right. He knows she will enjoy the punishments. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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very well done, just wish it was nc rather then consenual (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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I would suggest to Internalydriven that perhaps he should write his own story instead of telling this author what she "should" have done in this one. This story is short but sweet. A micro-gem. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
InternalyDriven
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Aug 9, 2002 |
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As a second story from this author, this actually peaked my interest. As a Master, if given the chance, I could see the unfolding scene as something I wouldn't mind trying on the submissive myself. Hmmmm!...the author could have added a few more humiliating elements to it. Perhaps the scene should have started only when the sub had "to go to the bathroom", that is, with the "real" threat of her humiliating herself in front of her Master by wetting/messing herself and the floor/bed. Nervously so...the sub would have to concentrate fully on what she was doing in the span of a precious few minutes or risk "the accident"...most amusing to watch I assure you...thus extending the suspense. Pee on the floor/herself/Master...whatever! Now that's funny. Another creative idea the author could have used...have Master write on the sub's forehead with a "Sharpie" black pen (I own one myself and have done this) the word "SLUT" in big letters...letting her know her place. Other toys on the bed could have included a wooden spoon, hair brush, ruler, or ping pong paddle. In conclusion, a pretty good story...I almost wish the stopwatch was broken..."Some Kind Of Stopwatch". (6/10)
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