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Black Breeding Jocelyn
Author: Karen Kay
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(Added on Apr 21, 2010)
(This month 18085 readers) (Total 30883 readers) |
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Unable to have children. Tom, the husband is at fault. Jocelyn selects a black baby to be the father. They make plans for the breeding |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Apr 25, 2010 |
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Good start, albeit a tad slower than I'm used to from Karen Kay. But it's not a bad thing either, as it whets the appetite for what's next.
Only thing I'd like to point out to Karen is to please leave bigger spaces between paragraphs where you switch scenes. It's disconcerting to go from James/Jocelyn to Mimi/Tom unexpectedly all the time...
JJ (8/10)
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