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The perfect membership
Author: bondray
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(Added on May 15, 2010)
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Kinky boyfriend's porn is found on the computer, Girlfriend finds a club that will help her boyfriend live his fantersys, but she finds that she loves it even more |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
budd666
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May 20, 2010 |
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great story line, needs to be finished; his permanent chastity, slavery, her's with more scenes of sexual exploitation and exploration. what the story lack in language skill, it makes up for it in content. please continue. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 20, 2010 |
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It looks as though the story has promise, but I was unable to read more than a quarter of the story because of the unacceptable very poor spelling, punctuation and grammar. If, as I suspect, English is not your first language, then I advise you have someone proof read the story and then resubmit it.
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switchy76
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May 19, 2010 |
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brilliant.plase write more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hotlava
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May 17, 2010 |
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Well written. Good descriptions. (8/10)
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