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Chloe takes control of her Queen Bee boss
Author: Tamara Powell
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(Added on Jun 9, 2010)
(This month 13256 readers) (Total 22957 readers) |
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Tamara has it all - money, power, a hot a boyfriend and a mean attitude to match. But when she is caught stealing by her manipulative 16yr ols employee, her life is about to become much more difficult/ |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
xspy4u
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Jun 19, 2010 |
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A promising story, although the lack of "sex" might reduce readership. I thought the way in which the physical descriptions of the characters were worked into the story was excellent (instead of just making a grocery list of attibutes) Two mechanical suggestions would be -Double space for easier reading and consider removing "extra" words like "at this stage". Dryhill is probably correct on the "realism" but my stories have plenty of far fetched scenarios so I'm okay with the $1.00. Would love to see another chapter. (7/10)
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Dryhill
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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There are many similar stories to this one but this author has lifted it out of the mediocre class and given it more promise than most. i like the attention to detail, in most stories the boss has to give her home away here it is sold for $1, whether or not this constitutes a legal transfer of ownership i like the attempt to add realism.
Well done Tamara, i look forward to reading more about these two (or three if the boyfriend stays around). (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 12, 2010 |
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This is a story -while not being an overly fantastic write- where everything feels just right, lifting it out, in a positive way, from similarly themed stuff.
A lot has to do with the spot-on drawing of Tamara's persona and the accurate setting of a certain mood.
Surely, both "Chloe Takes Controll..." and its author are worth keeping an eye on...
JJ (8/10)
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Surtea
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Jun 11, 2010 |
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Mmm, like it! It works for me. Please write more and let us know where poor Tammy ends up! The dialogue is good and the characters are horny. (8/10)
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switchy76
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Jun 9, 2010 |
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excellent story. really easy to read and straight to the point. you could make this a long running story i think. i hope you do. (8/10)
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