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The Video
Author: Alebeard
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(Added on Jun 10, 2010)
(This month 70999 readers) (Total 90040 readers) |
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A high school student receives a text message with a link to a very interesting video of a neighborhood milf being abused. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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We are told that Mrs. Parker is "every school boys wet dream" and "we all loved to dream about her". Can you be sure, surely this imaginary place will still have the usual mix of homosexuals? This point and the poorish grammar ruins what could be a good story, well at least for me.
The (4/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 12, 2010 |
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Okay-ish recount of Mrs. Parker's perils. Too much emphasis on how blond Mrs. Parker seems to be, or how entire cities seem to lust after her.
Story is dripping alright; probably because Alebeard has been drooling all over his keyboard.
In other words, lots of room for improvement.
JJ (6/10)
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dbenne2002
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Jun 11, 2010 |
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Story line is coming along very well. sexual adventures are explained in more detail. Can't wait till she is in Junior College. (10/10)
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